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| author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2013-07-02 05:44:04 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-03 08:19:20 -0400 |
| commit | 409dee2e44e7dc73d6bf00d782938e4cb4105f5b (patch) | |
| tree | d7b1b56af3366bb15f2743cc767a0c51a966e5fa /man/crypttab.xml | |
| parent | 337fa161c40f26cb7c33847d666556d28905b6a9 (diff) | |
man: more grammar improvements
- place commas
- expand contractions (this is written prose :)
- add some missing words
Diffstat (limited to 'man/crypttab.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/crypttab.xml | 10 |
1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/man/crypttab.xml b/man/crypttab.xml index 1063b46e0..e52b7e601 100644 --- a/man/crypttab.xml +++ b/man/crypttab.xml @@ -83,15 +83,15 @@ underlying block device, or a specification of a block device via <literal>UUID=</literal> followed by the UUID. If the block device contains a LUKS signature, - it is opened as a LUKS encrypted partition; otherwise + it is opened as a LUKS encrypted partition; otherwise, it is assumed to be a raw dm-crypt partition.</para> <para>The third field specifies the encryption password. If the field is not present or the password is set to none, the password has to be manually - entered during system boot. Otherwise the field is + entered during system boot. Otherwise, the field is interpreted as a path to a file containing the - encryption password. For swap encryption + encryption password. For swap encryption, <filename>/dev/urandom</filename> or the hardware device <filename>/dev/hw_random</filename> can be used as the password file; using @@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ <listitem><para>The system will not wait for the device to show up and be unlocked at boot, and not fail the - boot if it doesn't show + boot if it does not show up.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -282,7 +282,7 @@ </variablelist> <para>At early boot and when the system manager - configuration is reloaded this file is translated into + configuration is reloaded, this file is translated into native systemd units by <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-cryptsetup-generator</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para> </refsect1> |