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authorJan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>2014-05-08 01:28:45 +0200
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2014-05-07 20:13:27 -0400
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doc: comma placement corrections and word order
Set commas where there should be some. Some improvements to word order.
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diff --git a/man/sd_bus_negotiate_fds.xml b/man/sd_bus_negotiate_fds.xml
index c2061941a..09563f8f7 100644
--- a/man/sd_bus_negotiate_fds.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_negotiate_fds.xml
@@ -79,35 +79,35 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<para><function>sd_bus_negotiate_fds()</function> controls whether
file descriptor passing shall be negotiated for the specified bus
- connection. Takes a bus object and a boolean, which when true
- enables file descriptor passing, and when false disables it. Note
+ connection. It takes a bus object and a boolean, which, when true,
+ enables file descriptor passing, and, when false, disables it. Note
that not all transports and servers support file descriptor
passing. To find out whether file descriptor passing is available
- after negotiation use
+ after negotiation, use
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_can_send</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
and pass <constant>SD_BUS_TYPE_UNIX_FD</constant>. Note that file
descriptor passing is always enabled for both sending and
receiving or for neither, but never only in one direction. By
- default file descriptor passing is negotiated for all
+ default, file descriptor passing is negotiated for all
connections.</para>
- <para>Note that when bus activation is used it is highly
+ <para>Note that when bus activation is used, it is highly
recommended to set the <option>AcceptFileDescriptors=</option>
setting in the <filename>.busname</filename> unit file to the same
setting as negotiated by the program ultimately activated. By
- default file descriptor passing is enabled for both.</para>
+ default, file descriptor passing is enabled for both.</para>
<para><function>sd_bus_negotiate_timestamps()</function> controls
whether implicit sender timestamps shall be attached automatically
- to all incoming messages. Takes a bus object and a boolean, which
- when true enables timestamping, and when false disables it. If
+ to all incoming messages. Takes a bus object and a boolean, which,
+ when true, enables timestamping, and, when false, disables it. If
this is disabled,
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_message_get_realtime_usec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_message_get_seqno</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
fail with <constant>-ENODATA</constant> on incoming messages. Note
that not all transports support timestamping of messages. On local
- transports the timestamping is applied by the kernel and cannot be
+ transports, the timestamping is applied by the kernel and cannot be
manipulated by userspace.</para>
<para><function>sd_bus_negotiate_creds()</function> controls
@@ -119,9 +119,9 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
fails with <constant>-ENODATA</constant> on incoming
messages. Note that not all transports support attaching sender
credentials to messages, or do not support all types of sender
- credential parameters. On local transports the sender credentials
+ credential parameters. On local transports, the sender credentials
are attached by the kernel and cannot be manipulated by
- userspace. By default no sender credentials are attached.</para>
+ userspace. By default, no sender credentials are attached.</para>
<para>These functions may be called only before the connection has
been started with