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authorJan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>2014-05-08 01:28:45 +0200
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>2014-05-07 20:13:27 -0400
commitb8bde11658366290521e3d03316378b482600323 (patch)
treeccecde357ccb3b109e69aa2a6227f7cd7c71aedc /man/sd_event_add_time.xml
parentdca348bcbb462305864526c587495a14a76bfcde (diff)
doc: comma placement corrections and word order
Set commas where there should be some. Some improvements to word order.
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diff --git a/man/sd_event_add_time.xml b/man/sd_event_add_time.xml
index 9af8bb9c4..983e48656 100644
--- a/man/sd_event_add_time.xml
+++ b/man/sd_event_add_time.xml
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
accuracy value in microseconds specifying a time the timer event
may be delayed. Specify 0 for selecting the default accuracy
(250ms). Specify 1 for most accurate timers. Consider specifying
- 60000000 or larger (1h) for long running events that may be
+ 60000000 or larger (1h) for long-running events that may be
delayed substantially. Picking higher accuracy values allows the
system to coalesce timer events more aggressively, thus improving
power efficiency. The <parameter>handler</parameter> shall
@@ -132,10 +132,10 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
actually have been called at a slightly later time, subject to the
specified accuracy value, the kernel timer slack (see
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>prctl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>2</manvolnum></citerefentry>)
- and additional scheduling latencies. By default the timer will
+ and additional scheduling latencies. By default, the timer will
elapse once (SD_EVENT_ONESHOT), but this may be changed with
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_event_source_set_enabled</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>. If
- the handler function returns a negative error code it will be
+ the handler function returns a negative error code, it will be
disabled after the invocation, even if SD_EVENT_ON mode is set.
</para>