From e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Jason St. John" <jstjohn@purdue.edu>
Date: Thu, 27 Jun 2013 21:51:44 +0200
Subject: man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages

Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.

To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.

[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
---
 man/systemd-hostnamed.service.xml | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/systemd-hostnamed.service.xml')

diff --git a/man/systemd-hostnamed.service.xml b/man/systemd-hostnamed.service.xml
index fe64a62fb..bdd3a51cc 100644
--- a/man/systemd-hostnamed.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-hostnamed.service.xml
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
         <refnamediv>
                 <refname>systemd-hostnamed.service</refname>
                 <refname>systemd-hostnamed</refname>
-                <refpurpose>Hostname bus mechanism</refpurpose>
+                <refpurpose>Host name bus mechanism</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
 
         <refsynopsisdiv>
@@ -57,14 +57,14 @@
                 <title>Description</title>
 
                 <para><filename>systemd-hostnamed</filename> is a system
-                service that may be used as mechanism to change the
-                system hostname. <filename>systemd-hostnamed</filename> is
+                service that may be used as a mechanism to change the
+                system's hostname. <filename>systemd-hostnamed</filename> is
                 automatically activated on request and terminates
                 itself when it is unused.</para>
 
                 <para>The tool
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>hostnamectl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
-                is a command line client to this service.</para>
+                is a command-line client to this service.</para>
 
                 <para>See the <ulink
                 url="http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/hostnamed">
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