From e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Jason St. John" <jstjohn@purdue.edu>
Date: Thu, 27 Jun 2013 21:51:44 +0200
Subject: man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages

Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.

To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.

[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
---
 man/systemd-timedated.service.xml | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/systemd-timedated.service.xml')

diff --git a/man/systemd-timedated.service.xml b/man/systemd-timedated.service.xml
index c82c0ff43..4f17bccc6 100644
--- a/man/systemd-timedated.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-timedated.service.xml
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
                 <title>Description</title>
 
                 <para><filename>systemd-timedated</filename> is a
-                system service that may be used as mechanism to change
+                system service that may be used as a mechanism to change
                 the system clock and timezone, as well as to
                 enable/disable NTP time
                 synchronization. <filename>systemd-timedated</filename>
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 
                 <para>The tool
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>timedatectl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
-                is a command line client to this service.</para>
+                is a command-line client to this service.</para>
 
                 <para>See the <ulink
                 url="http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/timedated">
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