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| author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2013-09-12 21:12:49 +0200 |
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| committer | Lennart Poettering <lennart@poettering.net> | 2013-09-12 22:09:57 +0200 |
| commit | 79640424059328268b9fb6c5fa8eb777b27a177e (patch) | |
| tree | e3579216d1afd438e667044869dcdf9c732ef18c /man/machine-info.xml | |
| parent | 982e44dbc3e70c97e83464a30354b80973d52b41 (diff) | |
man: wording and grammar updates
This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various
issue spotted. I guess I can just skip over reporting ubiquitous
comma placement fixes…
Highligts in this particular commit:
- the "unsigned" type qualifier is completed to form a full type
"unsigned int"
- alphabetic -> lexicographic (that way we automatically define how
numbers get sorted)
Diffstat (limited to 'man/machine-info.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/machine-info.xml | 8 |
1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions
diff --git a/man/machine-info.xml b/man/machine-info.xml index 7f396aafd..ddf8f8b3d 100644 --- a/man/machine-info.xml +++ b/man/machine-info.xml @@ -94,13 +94,13 @@ <term><varname>PRETTY_HOSTNAME=</varname></term> <listitem><para>A pretty - human-readable UTF8 machine identifier + human-readable UTF-8 machine identifier string. This should contain a name like <literal>Lennart's Laptop</literal> which is useful to present to the user and does not suffer by the syntax limitations of - internet domain names. If possible the + internet domain names. If possible, the internet hostname as configured in <filename>/etc/hostname</filename> should be kept similar to this @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ an Internet hostname of <literal>lennarts-computer</literal> might be a good choice. If this - parameter is not set an application + parameter is not set, an application should fall back to the Internet host name for presentation purposes.</para></listitem> @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ this machine according to the <ulink url="http://standards.freedesktop.org/icon-naming-spec/icon-naming-spec-latest.html">XDG Icon Naming Specification</ulink>. If - this parameter is not set an + this parameter is not set, an application should fall back to <literal>computer</literal> or a similar icon name.</para></listitem> |